Bring Them To My Feathers

For my very first request done by Eternal.Knot on FA: www.furaffinity.net/user/etern… I have finally completed my first official Redwall tickle picture with him. Loosely inspired from Redtooth's and Fangburn's failure in episode 5 where Cluny has Fangburn and Redtooth dress up as clowns to infiltrate Redwall. Now we get to see what happens when he punishes his henchmen.
This picture was drawn by Eternal.Knot: www.furaffinity.net/user/etern… and he has given me permission to post it on my gallery.
Redwall is owned by Brian Jacques

"Idiots! Cluny bursted out at his two rat henchmen, as they crouched down before him, filled with fear. "Why is it that your bumbling fools never learn from your mistakes!" The two rats tried their best to explain themselves. " There were too many of them, we were lucky that they spared our lives." said Redtooth. "I at least put up a fight, you got knocked over by the hilt of a dagger!" Redtooth continued, now arguing with Fangburn. "Well at least I wasn't launched through the air by a catapult, yelling like a woman!" replied Fangburn. "SILENCE!" It disgusts me to have men that can be defeated by mere monks and circus folk, now you both will pay the price for your incompitance! To the stocks with them!!" The rest of the soldiers in Cluny's camp roared with laughter and excitement, knowing the type of punishment that the two rat's were about to recieve. "No No Please! Not that Chief! We'll do better! We promise!" Redtooth yelled out as he and Fangburn were carried off to a certain tent. "Please have mercy Chief! I can't take that! No!" The pleas fell on the deaf ears of their fellow soldiers and Cluny. He wouldn't allow any form of weakness from his followers.

With their hands and big feet restrained in wooden stocks, the two scared rats had nothing else to do but sit and shake with fear. Shortly, Cluny entered the tent, holding two long and stiff feathers. "Chief please! If their any other punishment to be used, please anything but this!" Fangburn continued pleading. "You were dragged out of the enemy base like some pathetic little vermin! You must be made an example of!" said Cluny as he examined one of the feathers. "Please No! I can't stand-" Fangburn began again. "ENOUGH!" Without wasting anymore words, Cluny began to brush the feather up and down Fangburn's right foot. Fangburn closed his eyes tight, trying to resist the ticklish sensation coming from his foot. Redtooth watched with fear, wiggling his toes, anticipating his turn. "Hur Hur Hur Hur Hur Hur Hur Hur! Heh Heh He He He He He He He! Please! He He He He He He He! Not That! Heh Heh Heh Heh Heh Heh Heh Heh!" Fangburn whimpered, "No, weakness in my army will not be tolerated! Those who show weakness shall suffer!" said Cluny as he switched back and forth between each of Fangburn's large dirty rat feet. "Y-Yes, no weakness! I'd never show any weakness, Chief! I'd die before I'd show any other form of-" Redtooth began sucking up to Cluny before turning to him. "SILENCE!" Don't think that I've forgotten about you! Your just as guilty as he is, and like him, you will pay the penalty!" Cluny then used his long tail to hold the other feather up and began using it to brush up and down Redtooth's right foot. "Oh, hohohohohohohohohohohoho! He He He He He He He He He! Please Chief! Her Her Her Her! It was all his fault! He He He He He He He He He!" pleaded Redtooth. "I tire of your pathetic pleas for mercy! Your feet will experience true torture! Besides it will help me feel better, and why wouldn't you want that." Cluny said with a slight smile. He then positioned both feathers against both feet of the rats and began brushing up and down, tickling both pairs of feet at once.

Redtooth and Fangburn couldn't hold their laughter in any longer, the stiff feathers were too much. "Haw Haw Haw Haw Haw Haw Haw Haw Haw! NHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHO! HAVE MERCY ON MY FEET CHIEF! THEIR TOO TICKLISH! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! PLEASE NOT MY TOES!" HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!" Yelled Fangburn. "HEH HEH HEHE HEH HEH HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! PLEASE NO MORE! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I CAN'T STAND HAVING MY FEET TICKLED! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! I SWEAR I WON'T FAIL YOU AGAIN!" HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!" After about 30 minutes of ticklish punishment, Cluny knew he had to plan for the next attack on Redwall and couldn't waist much more time with these two fools. "Cheesethief! Darkclaw!" Cluny shouted. In came two more rat henchmen. "I need sometime to plan out next attack on that cursed Abby, so continue tickling their feet with these feathers, until every bit of dirt is brushed from the heels to the toes, and then continue tickling them!" Cluny ordered. "It will be our pleasure Chief." said Cheesethief with an evil smile.

Cluny then left the tent, leaving the two ticklish rats to their punishment. "It's probably lucky for them that there isn't any livestock around, an animal's tongue could strike the fear of failure into these pathetic fools."

Original artwork by Eternal.Knot: www.furaffinity.net/user/etern…
Original Picture: www.furaffinity.net/view/11580…