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Shining Laughter Part 3 by dlpeattie Shining Laughter Part 3 by dlpeattie
The Shining Tears: Haunted Castle series continues, as the group of Beastmen Generals continue to search for their lost companion, Lazarus. But little do they know about the playful spirits that haunt the dungeon walls of the castle. Now with one of them captured by the ghosts, the 3 remaining Generals continue to search the dungeons separately for Lazarus, unknown to what further awaits them in the shadows.


For the previous entries of this series you can see them here.

1. [link]
2. [link]


This commission was drawn by Symbol-Hero: [link] and he has given me permission to post it on my gallery.




Hyoun the crystal dragon, like the rest of the group, continued to search the endless hallways of the dungeon. "Ah! This is impossible! How am I going to find Lazarus in this maze!" When he got to the end of the cell block he suddenly heard something behind him. Turning around, he stood alert and listened for whatever made that sound. He waited for a few second before hearing something again, it was some sort of laughter followed by a strange cranking sound. Hyoun slowly walked down the hallway, listening for the strange noises. He heard them again, a little louder this time. Hyoun moved farther and farther down the hall when he suddenly couldn't hear the noises any more. Nervous, he called out to who that was, but got no answer. He was about to continue further when he heard a creaking noise, it sounded like it was right next to him! He turned to his left and saw that one of the cell doors was wide open, he swore that all the doors were closed in the hallway. With his sword at the ready, he slowly moved toward the doorway and peered inside.


The room was somewhat dim, but he could still see much of what was in the room. He then walked over to the largest object in the room, upon closer inspection it was a torture device, a stretching rack. He then examined the wall next to it, which housed various tools on a wall rack, strangely the tools looked and felt like hand brushes and feathers. Suddenly the main door slammed shut, Hyoun quickly turned around ran to the door. He looked out through the small viewing hole in the door but saw no one. He called out for help but no one answered, not wanting to stay in the room a second longer, Hyoun raised his sword with both hands and was about to smash the door open but he then felt something grab his wrists. Seconds later before he could react, Hyoun was flung backwards through the air and landed on the rack. He then felt some sort of force grab his legs and moved them in place over the ankle clamps and locked his feet and tail in place. After happening so fast, it took Hyoun a minute to realize what position he was in. What just happened? How was he on the rack? Who or what grabbed him? Hyoun continued to struggle as the wrist clamps held his arms in a position where he could only move them around a bit. After a minute or two, Hyoun saw something to his left. It was some sort of strange white light, it couldn't be a torch. As it moved closer, it began to light up the area around him, and he managed to get a better look. It was some sort of Willow-the-wisp type of spirit. It hovered passed Hyoun, who watched nervously, as it floated towards the wall rack, he could now fully see that the wall rack indeed had feathers and brushes attached to it. The spirit enveloped one of the long brushes and levitated it. Hyoun was starting to get really confused, he had no idea on why he was restrained and what the spirit was going to do with a simple brush. He continued to watch the ghostly mist as it brought the brush down toward the end of the rack, towards his feet. Once it reached his soles, the spirit began to brush up and down Hyoun's left sole.


Not quite expecting such an action, Hyoun burst into rapid giggles as the ghost continued tickling Hyoun, despite his pleas. After a few minutes Hyoun then notice that other Willow-the-wisp spirits appear in the room, and most of them went to the wall rack. Knowing what was going to happen, Hyoun tried his best to free himself from the rack, but for a device that probably hasn't be used in years, it was surprisingly sturdy. Hyoun watched as the other spirits picked up various feathers and brushes as one spirit used another long brush to use on his right foot, three circular brushes were used on his belly, and two feathers were used on his armpits. Hyoun's laughter increase greatly as the ghost playfully tickle Hyoun all over. But during the tickling, Hyoun felt something tugging on his wrists, he looked up and saw the last spirit slowly turning the crank handles on the rack, slowly stretching him. Hyoun laughed louder and louder as the spirits tickled all over the soft parts of his body while the spirit operating the rack stretched Hyoun's body tighter and tighter, to the point where Hyoun started making loud moans due to the pressure, then the spirit would loosen the rack so to give him brief relief, but then would start back up again.


After 30 minutes, Hyoun was in tears from laughing as the spirits continued to tickle him all over his stretched out body, hoping that the rest of the group would eventually find him with all the noise he was making. Meanwhile, both Raihi the tiger general met up with Rouen the wolf king when both bumped into each other at a cross lane in the dungeon labyrinth. "Raihi?! Did you find any trace of Lazarus?" asked Rouen, "No nothing yet, this place is like a maze, everything looks the same." Rouen pondered for a minute. "Hmmmmm, I think we better stay together this time, I have no idea where the other are, they could be lost in here somewhere." Raihi agreed, "Yes that would be a good idea. I've got a feeling that this place is cursed, I keep hearing strange laughter everywhere."

To Be Continued.........


Original artwork by Symbol-Hero: [link]
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:iconteknikcaliber:
TeknikCaliber Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
huh so if I walked in there barefoot and stood up on my toes BAM I would get tickled
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dlpeattie Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013
Pretty much, that's how the ghosts do work.
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TeknikCaliber Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Or I just lay down with not shoes on
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J-Wolfe15 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
O.O Hawt damn, this is amazing. I would love to venture into a castle like that, but would die if subjecated (sp?) to that particular treatment.
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
You might get a few scares and tickles, but I doubt any death would come to you.
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J-Wolfe15 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
I can handle the scares, but tickles with the brushes like that on my soles, that's death.
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
Heh, have you ever heard of the Night Gaunt? It's a creature from H.P. Lovecraft mythology. It's apparently a monster that can tickle you. Check it out: [link] Funny how there really is a tickle monster in folklore.
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J-Wolfe15 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012
No. *checks the link out* Interesting.
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xenap3 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
heh Wow that's actually cool and hot. I'd love to give those soles a good lick
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
Having muscular males being stretched on racks is always the type of situation that I always will enjoy in art. :)
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Lylithix Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
I just realised I hadn't left a comment here so I'll rectify this now. Symbol-Hero really has done a good job with the Shining Laughter series so far and I think this has to be my favourite with how beautifully the colouring on Hyoun turned out, as well as the intricate detail on his clothing and I love the mist-like effect for the wisps. It looks like quite an effective combination with the rack and the tickling tools, with there still being some brushes and feathers available to tickle the crystal dragon some more. I really enjoyed the story as well, with the narrative building it's way up to a spectacular conclusion and I wonder what will be in store for Raihi?
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2012
I do like the stylish coloring he did for the picture, although I requested that he edit the wisps a bit because they were a little too bright in the original version and it was hard to see some of the tickle tools.

For the next part in the series, the scenerio with Raihi will be simple but sweet. Though, Rouen's tickle scenerio will be quite good. I hope you enjoy the rest of the series when they get done.
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WereWes Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
cool.
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Thanks, I do like the style Symbol-Hero went with.
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:iconcorfide:
corfide Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
know where i can post a resume so i can work here?
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Oh, that's very easy, you can simply do that at the castle...........While In The Afterlife! Muhahahahahahahaha!
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:iconcorfide:
corfide Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
not that much into killing myself. looks like i'll have to wait in the meantime ;)
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Stormsoul22 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
It is so great being a gay man with a tickle/anthro fetish with you around!
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
Heh Heh, Well there are so many female tickle pictures out there, so I thought I'd try and banance the amount by commissioning pictures involving manly muscualr males getting tickled all over. Understandable enough. :) I'm glad you enjoy my gallery.
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Mahad-Dragon Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012   Digital Artist
Accursed wisps! *Puffs flame at them*
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
I guess you may have come across those Whisps in certain roleplaying games?
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Mahad-Dragon Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012   Digital Artist
Icewind Dale comes to mind, nasty little electrocuting creatures! Nothing a good enchanted sword couldn't pawdle, that and lightning spells... or was it another spell type... They're in Oblivion too, damaging your willpower and intelligence. Pitty they are so alluring with their shiney glow...
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
Heh, the ones that inhabit this castle are even worse, they could tickle you to death.
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:iconmahad-dragon:
Mahad-Dragon Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012   Digital Artist
DOWN WITH THE WISPS! *Points for others to go in and attack, while he waits a safe, far away distance...*
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
*The castle doors suddenly close behind them and moments later a great amount of hysterical laughter is heard.* Whoops, sorry try again next time. Ha Ha Ha!
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Mahad-Dragon Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012   Digital Artist
*Swallows and scrtiches a chin scale in guilt as he rushes at the doors with sword brandished* I shall save thee! ...hopefully!
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dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
*you immediately drop through a trap door in the enterance and enter a dungeon maze where you can hear your fellow dragon soldiers laughing through the hallways.* Yay, our hero! He He
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the-tickle-lover Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
for me the pic is too tiny to you have a biger one? (I still havn't read the story but I will soon enough!!)
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
Sorry I don't. Though I don't know how the picture is tiny at full view. You can download it to see it up close if you wish. I hope you enjoy the story. ;)
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the-tickle-lover Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
I just read the story and I bet you wanna keep the wolf for the end ^^
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
Heh, well he is big, muscular, huggable, big footed, who wouldn't. Though I'll tell you this, the tiger generals picture is going to be quite basic, though Rouen's picture will be very memorable. ;)
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:iconthe-tickle-lover:
the-tickle-lover Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
because its a wolf!! you love wolf don't ye?
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
Of course, I always give my best when it comes to wolves. Though that dosen't mean that I treat other characters with less tickles. I hope you enjoy the rest of the pictures.
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:iconthe-tickle-lover:
the-tickle-lover Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
yes but I don't see it clearly I can't wait to see other pic ^^
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012
If your talking about how the ghost arua is drawn then I'll be sure to have the aura be like in the previous parts of the series.
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Robostitch7 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
^__^ Very cute comission hehe

^////^ I rather love the color combination for his feet
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Thanks, Symbol-Hero did a great job with the stylish coloring.
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Robostitch7 Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
;) Hehe nice. I do hope you do another comission of this little guy. That belly of his needs a good tickling ;)

Awesome comission anyway
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012
Well I'm sure that the brushes on his belly will keep him company. I definitely might tickle these characters again someday. We shall see.
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jackshow Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Dang Wisp always causing trouble...wounder how this all ends.
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Heh, that's what will happen to ya when your around playful ghosts. I don't think the ending will be too spectactular, what all happens at the very end of the story, I mean. But the 5th picture will be great. :)
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:iconjackshow:
jackshow Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
That was not me being smart...That is something i would do for a end.
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
I have thought about that, though I might just end it at the 5th picture, with the epilogue of the picture's story explaining what happens. I am interested in doing other things with the artist, so I think 5 pics in the series is good enough. :)
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:iconjackshow:
jackshow Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
your choice man...just throwing a idea out there...
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Ideas are always welcome. ;)
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:iconjackshow:
jackshow Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Let me guess...All the characters getting tickled?
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dam0730 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
I really gotta say that seeing dragons tickled is always awesome. Great job!
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Thanks, I do love seeing dragons getting tickled, especially big muscular ones. They have some much going for them, big muscles, big feet, a sexy body, a cool look. There's just so much win!
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dam0730 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Yes indeed! How do you feel about Spyro being tickled? Just curious.
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2012
Hmmmm, I do like tickle pics of Spyro, though he is a little small for my tastes. Though I wouldn't mind seen a different version of Spyro being tickled, maybe one where he's more grown up and such. (and has bigger feet)
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