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The Cargon's Punishment by dlpeattie The Cargon's Punishment by dlpeattie
In this new commission, we have the OC character, created and owned by Karosu: [link] The ticklee is a Cargon (a fictional species of Lugia, I believe) named Carcar. This commission was made by Evillabrat: [link] who frequently makes commissions and fan art of Carcar.

I first got interested in making a foot washing/tickling picture of the character was when I saw this picture of Carcar referencing his big smelly feet: [link] And Karosu was more then happy to let me commission a foot washing tickle picture.

This commission was done by the artist, Evillabrat, and the character is owned by Karosu. And both have given me permission to post this commission on my gallery.

NOTE: The human appearing in the story below is the same character as seen in the same reference picture from above: [link] I shall call him Karosu since he references himself like that in the comments.




The Cargon helplessly struggled in the large set of metal stocks, desperately twisting and turning his limbs as best he could. Suddenly a human male he was familiar with, stepped into the shower-like room with him.

Carcar: "Oh, heh heh hey there Karosu. Lovely day were having, nice fresh air." The cargon said with a nervous tone.

Karosu: "Ha, yeah like the fresh air reeking from your dirty footwear?!"

The young man pointed towards the Cargon's odor-filled sock-like boots that were laying to the side of the stocks.

Carcar: "Oh yeah. Heh Heh Heh though, I always make sure to let my feet breathe every once in a while."

Karosu: "Yeah, but you always neglect to wash those big smelly feet of yours! And me and every living thing at your knee height can't take much more of it! That is why I ordered this special foot cleaning machine to make sure that it gets the job done."

The Cargon took another look at the stocks he was trapped in.

Carcar: " A foot washing machine?! Sheesh Karosu, where did you get this thing? Anthro inquisition 3000?"

Karosu: "It doesn't matter where I got it. All I know is that you are going to finally get your feet washed and that's final!"

Carcar: "Awwwwww, (sigh) alright fine by me, Mom."

The Cargon grumbled as Karosu operated a remote control that activated the first part of the washing machine. Two circular brushes attached to the side of the stocks extended its appendages across to the heels of the Cargon, emitting sudsy water from the bristles. Both brushes then started to spin at a high speed as it brushed the Cargon's heels.

Carcar: "Pffffffffffheheheheheheheheh he he he he he he he he he ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! Hey! ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! Wait Stop! ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! The brushes, ha ha ha ha ha tickle! Ho ho ho ho ho ha ha ha ha ha!"

Karosu: "Heh, so your feet are ticklish, ay? Well, that's too bad, because your feet are getting washed and I'm going to see it through and through."

Two more circular brushes located just above the heel-level brush, started to approach the middle of the Cargon's soft soles and began to wash the area at the same high speed.

Carcar: "Nohohohohohohohohohoho Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha! Please! I prohohohohohomis I'll Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha wash my fehehehehehehet for now ohohohohohohohon! Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha!"

Karosu: "Hmmmmm, I don't know. Over the years I've known you, you haven't been a very honest little Cargon, now have you?"

Just then, two more brushes approached the Cargon's large feet, this time, the area right under his toes.

Carcar: AAAAAAAHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHaHa!! Oh Pleeeease! I promise I'll Ha Ha Ha Ha Ha wash mhahahahahahay feet more! Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!"

Karosu: Well, we can talk about that after you session is over. Don't worry your half-way done."

At the final stage, eight smaller brushes emerged from the frame of the stocks, right in between the Cargon's long toes, along with two tentacle appendages with toothbrush bristles emerging in between the feet. All the smaller brushes proceeded to wash the Cargon's smelly toes.

Carcar: "AAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! NOHOHOHOHOHOHO! NOT MY TOES! HA HA HA HA HA! PLEASE NO MOHOHOHOHOHOHOHOHORE! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA! MERCY! HE HE HE HE HE HA HA HA HA HA!"

After a simple 10 minutes, which felt like a lifetime for Carcar, the foot washing machine was finally finished and the Cargon's infamous feet were finally clean.

Karosu: "There, now that wasn't so hard? Now you better take good care of your feet, or its another session for you in the machine. Understood?"

Carcar: Ha ha ha ha, Oh yes yes! ha ha ha ha ha ah, but could you please let me out quick. I gotta go!"

Karosu: "Go where?"

Carcar: "I GOTTA PEE!"


Original art by Evillabrat: [link]
Original Picture: [link]
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:iconlugnutknucklehead:
LugnutKnucklehead Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
So much attention to detail.  Between the toes is extra mean!
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
Thanks. ;-)
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:iconlugnutknucklehead:
LugnutKnucklehead Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
I hope the off switch is hard to find.
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
I'm sure it is.
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:iconlugnutknucklehead:
LugnutKnucklehead Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
Even if someone shows up to rescue him, they can't figure out how to turn it off!
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014
No probably not.
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:iconblovell:
Blovell Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't think I would even mide having my feet washed like this
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013
Yeah, it's only for the brave.
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:icondrake-ergenthal:
Drake-Ergenthal Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
Was Carcar let out to go to the bathroom or did he peed himself?
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
Oh I'm sure he was. ;)
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:icondrake-ergenthal:
Drake-Ergenthal Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2011
Carcar: (sighs) "Thanks! I feel much better."
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:iconmpt0922:
MPT0922 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That's... an interesting way to tickle somebody.
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011
Heh, well its just his bad luck that he's ticklish.
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:iconanon1984:
Anon1984 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
So here is the conclusional question:

Has he learnt his leason or not
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2011
Heh, well according to this picture made after this commission, I don't think he learned his lesson: [link]
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:iconanon1984:
Anon1984 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
So he hasnt learned his lesson which means he is gonna have another session sooner or later
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
Heh Heh, we'll see.
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:icon3dfluf:
3dfluf Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2011
i'd love to be punished like that
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
Heh, then in that case you should get you feet super smelly and go bug Karosu with them. He He (though the user Karosu does go by a different name.)
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:icon3dfluf:
3dfluf Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2011
found him on FA thanx
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:iconmatrix-start-215:
MATRIX-START-215 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
wow, This is so funny! This has got to be the most inescapable tickling machine ever!
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011
Heh Heh, well there are alot of inescapable tickle machines, its usually depends on how there made. But this one looks pretty solid.
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:iconlylithix:
Lylithix Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011
Feet those large need a lot of cleaning though I think Carcar will have learnt his lesson and will make sure he washes them from now on. I think it would be a good idea though if he has another session with the foot washing machine every so often just to make sure. Of course after they've been washed, it's also important to make sure they're thoroughly dried. :)

I really like Evilabrat's work with reproducing Carcar and it's nice seeing a more avian/draconic non-anthro character with rather good looking feet (now thankfully odourless) and once again you've got a very nice story to go with it.
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011
Yeah, those feet were screaming for a foot washing machine. And I am quite glad that alot of people on here are quite open minded on the tickle theme.

Evillabrat's art is fun to look at and he know how to draw the Cargon very well. The story was also fun to write as well.
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:iconshadowpan10:
ShadowPan10 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011
Hahaha, very nice. Lovely pic. and the story rocks.
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011
Thanks, at first it was just going to be a short series of dialogue but I guess I always end up improvising it further. Ha Ha
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:iconshadowpan10:
ShadowPan10 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011
*chuckles* Hey, improvising is a good thing. ;)
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:iconinuzaka:
inuzaka Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so shiny and squeeky clean
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:icondlpeattie:
dlpeattie Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011
Yep, so shiny they squeak when they are tickled. He He
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:iconinuzaka:
inuzaka Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
woot first comment
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